Wednesday, April 27, 2016

Bullying is bad

     Hello, I’m going to tell you about bullying and why it’s bad. I’m going to tell you about what happens to people who are bullied, how to stop bullying, and cyberbullying. And after this you help people who have been bullied before. So students can focus on their education and not worrying about bullies. I hope you enjoy.

   First, when someone is bullied they could miss their classes, they don’t go to school because they don’t want to be bullied. And is some evidence about extreme cases of bullying dailymail.cov. Said “2,000 U.S. schoolchildren have committed suicide as a direct result of bullying.”(published may, 21 2012). Many students have killed themselves because they were bullied. Just imagine what their parents would feel when they find out that their child killed themselves.

   Secondly, how can people stop bullying. Stopping bullying is important if bullying stops people wouldn’t have to be worried about someone torturing them. Yet people haven't found a way to stop bullying schools have tried to stop bullying Stella Insomniac said “three things schools can do to reduce bullying among students are to get uniforms, better the punishments, and showing better guidelines of what bullying is opposed to what people believe what bullying is.”(unknown publish date) This shows what schools can do to stop bullying.

     Lastly, one of the most common types of bullying is cyberbullying. Cyberbullying is a person who posts mean pictures or mean comment. A study was taken to see what type of person had experienced cyberbullying and girls were the most common gender to have experienced it. And cyberbullying is different from other types of bullying scholastic said “One of the capacities of cyberbullying is that it goes from zero to 60 rapidly—it can go viral very quickly and can live permanently online.” So cyberbullying isn’t private like other types of bullying, it can be seen by everyone and it can ruin your life.

     In conclusion bullying is a terrible because of the effects, but it can be stopped, yet cyberbullying could make it even harder to stop. So please try to help stop bullying. It doesn't have to be a lot just ask a school principal to have school uniforms. And I hope you enjoy.


  1. When you start to write, avoid starting with a " hello" in formal writing.

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  3. Praise:Great job with including the information on why bullying is bad to others.

    Press:Why is comitting suicide due to bullying bad?

    Polish:You have a few capitalization errors in your writing.